This week my group and I were learning to paragraph. Our success criteria was I had to stick to one topic. My first sentence was my topic sentence. I have added 2-3 supporting details and my last sentence was my concluding sentence.
I enjoyed finding facts about Lisa Carringtons life.
I found it tricky find facts about Lisa Carrington´s family because not much is known about her family.
Next time I would change the athlete I am writing about because I think it would be cool to learn about different athletes.
Here is my report.
Name Lisa Carrington
Date of birth: 23rd of June 1989
Place of birth: Tauranga
Sport: Canoe sprint
Life
Lisa Carrington is 32 year old canoe sprinter. The first Olympics she went to was the 2012 Olympics.Lisa Carrington went to Whakatane High School. After graduating she went to Massey University. Lisa Carrington Got into kayaking because when she was little her dad took her to a kayaking camp even though she didn´t know what K1 paddling even was or if it was a competitive sport.
Family
Lisa Carrington´s parents are Pat and Glynis Carrington.Lisa Carrington has two brothers named Shaun and Brett Carrington. Brett Carrington is the Cfo of a toyota finance.Lisa carrington´s fiance is Michael Buck. He works as a senior manager at Queensland.
This week my group and I were learning to paragraph.Our success criteria was I had to stick to one topic. My first sentence was my topic sentence. I have added 2-3 supporting details and my last sentence was my concluding sentence.
I enjoyed finding facts about Lisa carringtons life.
I found it tricky find facts about Lisa Carrington´s family because not much is known about her family.
Next time I would change the athlete I am writing about because I think it would be cool to learn about different athletes
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